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When two Became as ONE by vinrylgrave When two Became as ONE by vinrylgrave
Artist Comment:

*fixed hinata eyes position
*fixed Uzumaki ...... eyes again
*i got a name for him :)
*fixed Uzumaki.....eyes again for third times
*improved layoud
*added name


SYNOPSIS:
Let me tell you the story...dont fell to sleep
so what is happening in here...
even though he has hyuuga bloodlines,he was considered as a failure or loser among the rest,
his byakugan is not as powerful as the original's...
took him quite sometimes just to able to activate it.and it does effect on mastering the Jyuuken Ho technique which require him to controll his cakra perfectly to his eyes and to his fist.without his eyes to able to see all the cakra points in the body,he cant use this jutsu....so at his current age,he still cant master the 64 points Jyuuken.
hyuuga felt ashame when they talk about him,so they prefer to keep silent.
His GrandDad,Hyuuga Hiashi was speechless to witness his grandchild,who was born inside the elite family cant do much than a low rank shinobi.

while for villagers that havent known him,they all talk sweet and praise him as a hero like his daddy.
when they know he is not as good as they expected,some of them still give him some respect,but most of them laugh and talk bad bout him.

He him self tried very hard not to dissapoint everyones he love.(glad he inherit naruto's never give up attitude:D)

-This scene is happening at the chuunin examp..
-AFTER THE THIRD NINJA WAR(its related to the Akatsuki Team 7 Story)
in the story he should look more dirty and beaten up...
everybody is like saying it must be luck that he able to proceed till the last round.

his apponent decided to humiliate him before he end the battle.
(Thanks to him,Our dude finally become Super Cool)

After so much provocation and humiliation,Our Dude
finally showed 'SOMETHING'that people used to expect from him.

With all of his unperfection
give birth to 1 of a extreme unique jutsu
After he activated his byakugan,he managed to find an opening and unleashed
"The Jyuuken Ho Hakke nijyu yousho"
its uncomplete version of 64 points that defenately kill all the cakra on the opponents body.
Instead of that its only strike at 24 cakra points and only able to paralize.
at the last point,he strike with unperfect rasengan to the opponents body with some alteration on cakra,it goes inside the opponent's body and reacted to all the 23 points cakra and morp into a perfect rasengan to hit inside the body
it happen to be each hit during the 23 strikes,our dude was aiming to seal the opponents cakra(creates a small cakra barrier with his owns around the opponent's cakra points cause it to flow full through the barrier)its very different than what the hyuuga usually do,they strike the point to cut the cakra flow.
so when the rasengan enter the last point (middle of ripcase area)it resonates with the others cause it to morp into complete rasengan.

"Same concept as how naruto did his rasengan.he need to use his another hand to inject the cakra around the rasengan."
(Dont know how people gonna survive that one,but ofcorse in the story the opponent didnt die,we dont want our dude become a killer to proof his existance rt?
Either he was holdin back or that guy just got lucky)

He wasnt able to master the complete Jyuuken........
He wasnt able to master Rasengan........
but he descovered what others cant......
He completed both jutsus as ONE
from that day onward.....
he was aknowledge....as the FUTURE LEGEND

fiuh...never had wrote this much in a day
hope you guys like it...
my english sucks,so forgive me if i spoil the fun.

Naruto(C) Masashi Kishimoto
ARTWORK and CHARACTER (C) Vinrylgrave
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:iconl-master:
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
beautiful and powerful :D
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goliath93 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
just an idea but maybe when the rasengan enters the body and forms it doesn't (not meant to) damage the opponent but explodes in a shock-wave like form of chakra through out their body blocking the rest of their chakra points
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vinrylgrave Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome idea we could use that for the other and more powerful variation of the jutsu.
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goliath93 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Thanks I always try to help evolve ideas cause original ideas are great but once you expand them the potential become almost completely unthinkable

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BladerZXZ Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
This is so amazing, you fuckin rule!!!!!!!!
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:iconchaos-sama321:
Chaos-Sama321 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
F**KING A++
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:iconshokkazuluman:
shokkazuluman Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really want to read more about this guy
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:iconobako-chan97:
obako-chan97 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student
THIS ISH SHOO COOLLLL AAWWW :squee::squee::squee:
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:iconnight390:
night390 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
one word NICE
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ConsensusMaximus Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
Dude. This is awesome. I love how you made his byakugan eyes very unique, almost like Mangekyō Sharingan but of course with a design of Naruto's Wind Release: Rasenshuriken severing as the iris', pupils white but lined out and the rest is of course the byakugan-enhanced white scarla. Very awesome and unique.
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:iconvinrylgrave:
vinrylgrave Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
it really intrigue me,that you commented about ideas behind the designs....cus i never design anything without putting any thoughts on it
and very few people noticed it.
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ConsensusMaximus Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
Huh. That so? Well I try to look at anything with an analytical view when I do look at anything I want to see and especially in the details. Still I am glad I was able to see your thoughts in this piece. Have a good one! ^__^
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:iconoliver1388:
Oliver1388 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
some is going to get F up
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:iconmikecanon:
MikeCanon Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
Great work.
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:iconnaruandpokefan:
Naruandpokefan Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Awesome!!! :icongreatjobplz:
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:iconuallsuk2:
Uallsuk2 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
VERY good!
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ChikaraRyoku Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
hyuuga fighting stance with a rasengan. one hit and the entire chakra network shuts down.
art looks great
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:iconcoloour:
Coloour Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Epic! :D
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MagiaWody07 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woah! Fantastic! :squee: :onfire: :love:
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centaury2 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
watch out! were dealing with a badass here!! seriously tho, their kid frightens me xD
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:iconredcar5:
redcar5 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
DAM I LOVE IT NICE JOB
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:iconhinasoul:
HinaSoul Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very well done!
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:iconnod-sama:
nod-sama Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
WOOWW!!!!! SUPER COOL!!!!!!!
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:iconhalfeatenfry:
HalfEatenFry Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Student Digital Artist
COol character...spilling image of his father. He can't deny it.
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:iconmajinlu:
MajinLu Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Awesome work! :D
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:iconbk00:
bk00 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Writer
I. oh my gawd. :wow:
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:iconoliver1388:
Oliver1388 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
some one is going to die
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sasuhina2723 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011
i love it sooo much!nice work
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shadownate Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
ilove it sooo much
if hinata and naruto get a kid, iwould love for him to be like that
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swordslayer622 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Picture: amazing.
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SasuNaruHina1 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is epic.
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:icondaresx:
DaresX Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011
This looks great!
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:iconkyuubigoku-sama:
KyuubiGoku-sama Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
it that ever happens, It will be the best S-rank jutsu out there.
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RaikiriWolf Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
OMG :|
MORE =D
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Dark0592 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
so is there a fanfic behind this? because i really want to read it
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:iconsorosoro:
Sorosoro Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011
Hello there can I sprite your character?
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:iconvinrylgrave:
vinrylgrave Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
oke :)
kindly credit me
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Sorosoro Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
Heh Check my channel he is done for a small part.
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Sharpbhoy Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love the artwork, however I do not like your story that goes with it.
I just don't imagine their kid to be weak, that's all. Nothing more to it. Just a personal preference.

It's got a lot of thought into it, which is great, but again, it's just a matter of opinion, otherwise, it would be really good, y'know?
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akiranextgeneration Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2011
i like this very much its very original? yea original thinking on ur part to think using both jutsus at once is a very creative feel for it i like it :)
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YoruichiNyow Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011
i like the concept ^-^ well done
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blazegovana Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Soooo...... Awesome!!!! :iconinloveplz:
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otakuawsomeness Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011  Student General Artist
AWESOME~!!!!!!!!! :heart:
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alban891 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
This is so great
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MGSmOBSCENE Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
I love it. In japan they released the profiles for the pairings Children and for Naruto and Hinata's second child, it read that he could combine Rinnegan and Byakugan into one in perfect harmony and go so far as to match half of Minato and Kushina's combined abilities if he absolutely had to, O_O And that folks is what you can get from using google translator on japanese manga sites. It's also how you find out that you never piss off Haru(its the name they got from a poll :P).
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vinrylgrave Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
really????
who is the 1st child then?
are u sure they'd released such information even though the manga hasnt come to an end of naruto's tale
i thinks its just some fanfic
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MGSmOBSCENE Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011
hmm? oh yeah well actually i cant remember the exact words because it was a few weeks ago that i learned it. ok in this manga site appearantly there are 2 kids, and the poll was for ideas for Naruto and Hinata's kid's names, the first is a girl with the name Kit (remember both the names are from a poll) and the second was a boy named Haru. Kit is the one with triple the abilities of Haru and the Honored Child,Haru is also the Honored child but appearantly has a much better control over the combined kekkai-ghenkai's(can you tell me how to spell that please) while Kit uses her better control over the kyuubi (i didnt believe it either but appearantly the seal was passed on)and combines the kekkai-ghenkai's with kyuubi eyes to form an uber thingie...what i said i didnt remember it all.
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LoneWolfDenz Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2010
this one is great ! :o
well done :)
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CRed1988 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010
I wonder is there a story on this one.... :pepsi:
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:iconvinrylgrave:
vinrylgrave Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
yeah i was planing to make the manga of it yet since naruto is getting really interesting rite now i figure out not to do it yet
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